Alexandria ([info]inthisheart) wrote,
@ 2004-08-08 11:23:00
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Current mood: sad
Current music:ANOTHER PERFECT DAY: American Hi-Fi

I still believe it when you say It's Another Perfect Day...
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Will you ever come back, I’m sick of waiting
All this time has passed, memories are fading
You’re gone, gone, and I keep on hoping
Hanging on a sliver, my breath is choking

We were just doing whatever and lying on the sidewalk
Laughing at anything, and finding people to stalk
But the book is closing, and you are going, somewhere, somewhere far away
I can not follow you, you don’t want me to, so where do I stay?

You’ve changed, never going to be the same, and away you fly
I guess, this is the end, this is when we say good-bye
You’ve scraped every minute of my heart, and tore away the beats
You leave me behind, scarring me, kissing my defeat

I wish that this was just a boomerang act,
And before I knew it, you’d be back
But there’s no use on wasting hopeless faith of magnificent pasts
The sun has set, the trees go black, it’s shadows have been cast

This is nothing pretty, nothing ugly either at all
But I’m aching because I know that in your life I’m now something small
Friendship is a beauty but when it ends the victim falls
The warrior moves on to different people, this time ones with balls

You’ve changed, never going to be the same, and away you fly
I guess, this is the end, this is when we say good-bye
You’ve scraped every minute of my heart, and tore away the beats
You leave me behind, scarring me, kissing my defeat


Not like this person cares at all...but I guess the point of an LJ is for kids like me to rant about whatever and express myself, so here I am. You probably don't really understand this poem...and that's okay. I just need to express myself. Yet; Life is beautiful right...?




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[info]soloalone
2004-08-08 11:43 am UTC (link)
thats an amazing poem.

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[info]frozen_
2004-08-08 12:01 pm UTC (link)
aaaw. i hope things get better =/

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[info]rep714
2004-08-08 01:00 pm UTC (link)
Aw, I hope you feel better about whatever is gonig on. Beautiful poem! <3

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[info]soap_songs
2004-08-08 01:47 pm UTC (link)
Beautiful poem. I'm always amazed at people who can express things through that medium.

oh and thanks for reminding me of "Another Perfect Day." I haven't heard it in awhile but now I want to listen again. ♥

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[info]luv_jades
2004-08-08 05:13 pm UTC (link)
that was really good!! who's it about? [sorry if thats nosey] i hope everything works out, and im here =)

<3 jada

btw, how do you do that heart?

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[info]inthisheart
2004-08-08 05:20 pm UTC (link)
& hearts;
but take out the space between the & and the "hearts;" part

hehe

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[info]luv_jades
2004-08-08 08:06 pm UTC (link)
thanks mucho!!


yay!!!

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[info]xkillmylove
2004-08-09 01:24 am UTC (link)
wow, that is beautiful.

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[info]shokshokrobot
2004-08-09 08:41 am UTC (link)
thats a very beautiful piece of writing, love. oh, and i dont mind the spam really...i actually may have to check it out! <3!!

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[info]boricuadelight
2004-08-09 12:53 pm UTC (link)
i love the poem i can really relate having had my heart broken very recently. thanks for posting it and for sharing it with us

Laura

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[info]inthisheart
2004-08-09 02:19 pm UTC (link)
it's actually not about heartbreak...it's about friendship:
"Friendship is a beauty but when it ends the victim falls
The warrior moves on to different people, this time ones with balls"

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[info]boricuadelight
2004-08-10 06:38 am UTC (link)
well i guess i saw it as heartbreak just cuz i fell for a friend of mine this one guy, and we are no longer friends...long story. so it hurt losing him and his friendship i mean he's gotten in contact with me to talk but i dont think he realizes how bad he hurts me or prob. just plain doesnt care so im kinda cutting him from my life. it still hurts though, but this is easier then having him in my life and continuing to care and him continuing to hurt me and not reciprocate ya know

Laura

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[info]einnannie
2004-08-09 01:25 pm UTC (link)
great poem <3

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[info]in_this_love
2004-08-09 01:53 pm UTC (link)
join my brand new community-http://www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=select_few
first 10 are auto accepted!! can't wait to see you there <3

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HELLO!!
[info]sweetcourt03
2004-08-09 11:33 pm UTC (link)
yeah, hi... u don't know me. I'm a friend of one of ur friends...or something like that. anyhoo. i loved the poem. i'm a fellow writer myself. good stuff. but i also love ur icon, Jonathan is SOOOOOOOOO SEXY. love him to bits... later!

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[info]singingdanielle
2004-08-10 01:07 am UTC (link)
amazing poem

+you seem like so much fun!!

im adding you!

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[info]lost_in_love04
2004-08-10 06:17 pm UTC (link)
hey i just read ur info and u seem really cool
like my friend danielle(rubber_duckers) said hehe
i'm saba btw
i'm friends with christy...
add me?

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[info]tonightwekiss
2004-08-11 01:51 pm UTC (link)


<33

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[info]lost_in_love04
2004-08-11 11:51 pm UTC (link)
ur really good at poetry.
i love writing poems 2....

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[info]reason_enough
2004-08-11 11:55 pm UTC (link)
hey I was wondering If you would do me ther HUGEST favor and let me know the over-ride to put the picture up top like your lay out is right now...... pleeaassee

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[info]sweet_6x6x6
2004-08-12 12:35 am UTC (link)

Sorry for the spam!

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[info]xtrue_liesx
2004-08-12 11:23 am UTC (link)
thats a really pretty poem!! =) i like it!!!

add me?<33

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[info]_doctordoctor_
2004-08-12 06:38 pm UTC (link)

[info]x_cute_x
Sorry for spam...

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[info]xo_jen_xo
2004-08-15 11:53 am UTC (link)
i just wanted to say ur journal is so0o cool!!! lol jen

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[info]_doctordoctor_
2004-08-16 07:32 am UTC (link)

[info]x_cute_x
I hope to see you there!
Sorry for the spam.

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[info]tickle_me_up
2004-08-16 08:27 pm UTC (link)
heyyy add me back! pleaseee =[

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[info]_fearneverfails
2004-08-19 02:47 pm UTC (link)
This is Brynn (423x).. This is my new LJ so add me back if you want.

Brynn ♥

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(Anonymous)
2004-08-20 08:16 pm UTC (link)

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&hearts;
(Anonymous)
2004-08-20 08:17 pm UTC (link)

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[info]soccercheer25
2004-08-23 07:40 pm UTC (link)

[info]___theconceited

  • another rating community.
  • short & simple application.
  • daily member updates.
  • accepted members page w/ photos.
  • in need of members!

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    [info]skiierbabe
    2004-08-25 09:09 pm UTC (link)


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    [info]killafish9
    2004-11-11 07:53 am UTC (link)
    Wow! You're an awesome poet! Thingy....yeah. :)

    &hearts

    just practicing. :)

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    [info]killafish9
    2004-11-11 07:54 am UTC (link)
    oh well, doesn't work. :(

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    [info]phelixx
    2004-12-17 07:53 pm UTC (link)
    Hey Alex (Mimi)! I was looking back on some of your entries and was amazed by this poem. I have a journal that's friends only because I don't like people to see my poems but now that I know you write them too I don't feel weird about it. I am adding you of course and hope you will do the same. Much love.<3

    Phelixx

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